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In the shop of horrors,
You found me in my box of self-denial.
I was torn and broken, tired and worn.
The color, was faded from the pieces of my heart.
No longer was I beautiful.
No longer was I a part of majesty.
I was a living nothing.

I was a masquerade.
Happiness was my façade,
Compassion was my dream.
Love, love was my one true desire.
I had a thirst for it,
Unlike any other I’ve ever had
I felt it, welling up inside me.
I was consumed by it.
I lived through it.
NO.
I lived in spite of the love I so desired.

I didn’t know love. I never knew love.
I knew the life of a puppet.
I was a toy, uncared for. The love…
What love?
It was an imitation.
Just like all of those gifts, those empty promises
That I, I was naïve enough to rely on.
Those empty promises.
I was a puppet, an incomplete puzzle.
So broken and dead, the flames of desire consumed me.

An incomplete puzzle, my being and my heart.
A life too complicated to piece back together.
I could not do it alone.
You took my hand, refusing to let me quit.
You refused to let me succumb.
You refused to lose me.

You held my hand and made me.
You guided me through those times
And only through Love’s hell did I realize…

It was you.
It is you.
It, forever, will be you.

You found a piece of me
You brought it and put it back where it belonged.
You glued me together, the broken pieces put back into place.
You tape the frayed corners, so that I stayed whole.
You framed me and worshipped me.
To you, I am a work of art.

Slowly, we walked together and I let go of your hand.
You embraced me, and I felt safe. I was
Invincible.
I can feel it and I can see it.
An incomplete puzzle, incomplete no longer;
Pieced together by love and lust and the power,
The power of suggestion.

I opened my heart and gave it to you,
You gave me a piece of yours in return;
It filled the empty void,
Resurrected the dead heart,
Refueled the ever-dying flame of hope I had of ever loving again.

It replaced the missing piece, it made me complete.
Instead of a puzzle, I was a picture
And because you created it, it’s worth much more than just
A thousand words.
It is worth none.

I give you my love.
I give you my strength.
I give you my fears.

I am…yours.
©2008-2009 ~AngolSakura515
:iconangolsakura515:

Author's Comments

I recently was a bystander in watching a blossoming relationship of two very good friends of mine. This poem was inspired by them. Reading the poem again, I laughed at how the story so mirrored my own life though, when interpreting the poem in terms of my life, it isn't about romance. It's just about solving the puzzle.

Enjoy.

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:iconneoxflame:
Touching. Solving the puzzle is indeed something that will make everything else fit the picture.

Wonderfully illustrated; keep it up!

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[~Amberoath]
:iconangolsakura515:
*blushes* I'm touched that you think so.
That someone such as yourself would venture to say something like this about my work...moves me deeply.
:iconneoxflame:
You're too kind. =) Give yourself some more credit. Because that way the whole world benefits too! =]

I don't take back a single word about your piece either; not one. =)

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[~Amberoath]
:iconangolsakura515:
I'm just being honest. Truly, that is how I think of you. Thank you for your kind words.
*blushes* I'm glad that you meant them. I truly thank you for taking the time to read my poetry, big brother. ^_^

How have you been?
:iconneoxflame:
Benn good; rather busy. =D But good; life is smooth.

Hopefully the workload aint killing you yet. =(

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[~Amberoath]
:iconangolsakura515:
I'm glad that you're doing well. How's school and everything? "Life is smooth..."? I'm so jealous.

The workload...let's not talk about the workload. *shrug* It's been alright.
:iconneoxflame:
Hmmmm. =] Life, in terms of smoothness, is good. Because though my workload is rather crushing in some aspects, it's also indeed quite fine when I look at it with a clear and tolerated mindset (those days when I'm cranky, however, and I'll complain about my workload like no tomorrow!) In other words, it could all be much worse...so right now, things seem fine indeed. ^______^

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[~Amberoath]
:iconcaroamy:
How I have missed you poetry dear cousin! A puzzle we must all complete one day in life..

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:iconangolsakura515:
I'm glad that life alright. My workload is pretty crushing as well. It's been quite a rollercoaster ride for me, as of late. But yes, as for me, it's fine if I'm not stressed, albeit that happens rarely. Always look on the bright side, right?
:iconangolsakura515:
I thank you from the bottom of my heart for taking the time to read it.
I have missed writing it as well.
Puzzles...they annoy me.

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